i felt that the presentation could have gone better if i did more explanation on tools and the proposing of the task itself, i have gotten good feedback and have been put onto the right route to getting a better mark, what i need to do is for me to research online portfolios and gather ideas and layouts from them for my own, i also need to better explain the tools and have more creative imagery to go with my words so that my explanation can be believable with it, i also need to go on about time management to improve my work plans, i also am required to have a high poly version of the model and completely forgot that it is necessary in the end
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